Graphic Novel

There is always a work in progress. For more than a year, I dedicated nearly all my free time to writing and illustrating a graphic novel. It's not anywhere near ready to show the world in its entirety; however, I am at a phase where I need feedback on the opening, because I am drafting (AGAIN), and want to know how likely readers would be to move ahead. I also am unsure of how to pursue this project. I'm toying with the idea of turning it into a multimedia production--involving illustration, animation, and video narration.

Here is the link to the first two chapters of my book. I love constructive feedback.